专升本英语作文

along with随着the development of society，mo1re and more越来越people take part in 参加the part-time jobs.–扣题，老师能读下去
you know，it is very good.i would like to take part in.because it is good.why it is good？(不能用good这么低级的词)first，i think that it help we very much，second，we can relax and make friend.in the end，we also study many things from it，so it is very important.
do you think so？
7分作文原因：内容基本切题，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子和用词错误，文章长度未达到要求，没有清楚地传达信息给读者

19分
高分四秀
1.秀万能理由
2.秀逻辑（万能理由的连接词）
3.秀高分句到
4.秀首尾（开头句+结尾句）
（首段）now we are entering进入a new era时代full of 充满（adj短语做后置定语修饰 era）opportunities机会and innovations创新，革新 and great changes改变 have taken place发生in在.方面peoples attitude towards对待.态度some traditional 传统的views观点.one of which is其中之一是taking part-time job（套题目），to this issue问题，different people come up with 提出various opinions观点.

（主体段）it is widely believed that 大家普遍认为taking part-time jobs certainly brings about several advantages 优点.first and foremost，（逻辑）students can learn how to get along with与某人相处 people and know了解 the society better；（万能理由）whats more，（逻辑）to take a part-time job provides the students with a valuable珍贵的 opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice把某事付诸于实践；（万能理由+高分句型）last but not least，
（逻辑）students can make some money，which helps to unload减轻 their familiesfinancial 经济burden负担.（万能理由+高分句型）that is why they have the above conclusion 结论.
（主体段）there is a good side and a bad side to everything，it goes without saying that不言而喻 it is no exception例外.for one thing，（逻辑）some students spend 花费too much time doing part-time jobs while 然而neglecting忽略 their studies；（万能理由）for another thing，（逻辑）when taking part-time jobs，the students may be distracted from转移注意力 their studies by通过the colorful lives in the society.（万能理由+高分句型）therefore因此 they hold it is a curse 观点.
（尾段）as far as i am/we are/he is concerned就我而言，taking account all of 把..考虑进内 the above factors因素，we should face it more reasonably 合理地，only in this way can we benefit from从中获益it

写作步骤
1.审题2min（看懂题目+还要去想一想这个题目适合哪种作文题材，适合套哪种模板）
2.草拟提纲3–5min（打草稿-默写模板）
3.正文写作21—23min（模板+题目灵活结合）
4.检查，修改4min（检查自己写的句子）
走入写作
一.要求
1.字数：hoo/120（120-150）
2.内容：切题、准确（围绕题目）
3.格式：3-4段
二.作文题材
1.议论文（拿社会上的一个话题进行讨论）：社会热点（针对一个纯好/纯坏的而一个而话题进行分析）+观点对比（有好有坏针对一个

话题，人们观点不一样）
creating 创造a green campus校园（社热）/part-time jobs/online learning
certificate证书 craze疯狂 on campus考证热（社热）/lifelong learning终身学习（对）
2.书信（申请信/建议信/邀情信）
3.图画（通过现象看本质）
4.名言警句（practice makes perfect–熟能生巧）
5.写人叙述类（a meaningful volunteer 志愿activity）

议论文

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 19:43
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社会热点型（好/坏）
出题类型：why 型/how型
why型
一、出题思路：

二、写作思路：
第一段.引题段（描述现象）
1（句）引起评论对象
2（句）对现象进行描述
第二段.主体（分析原因）–重头戏
1（句）过渡句
2-5（句）逻辑连接词+万能理由2-3个+高分句型
第三段.结论
好事预测未来趋势，
坏事给出建议措施

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 26:49
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now we are entering a ?new era full of opportunities and innovations and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional views.one of which is——题目—
what are the reasons for it？ln the following接下来的 paragraphs/contents内容.i will explore探索 them.in the first place，——+理由1+高分句子——.in the second

place，——+理由2+高分句子——.in the last place，+理由3+高分句型.consequently因此，–题目–is so heated有热度的！
in a word总而言之，the whole整个 society should pay close亲密的attention to密切关注 the topic of题目only in this way can we have a better future.（好）
/with随着the development of society，-——题目——needs our attention.so its urgent紧急的and necessary必要的 to solve解决it.if every member 成员is willing to 乐意做某事contribute himself to贡献，促成the society，it will be better and better.（坏）

万能理由（参考）

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 39:00
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1.成就感（achievement）
关键词：
a sense of achievement 成就感
grand feat 辉煌的业绩
elevate our self-esteem有助于自我实现

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 39:30
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关键句：

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 40:11
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by doing（-attending university 上大学）.…，we can enjoy a sense of achievement，which（定从，去修饰achievement）will（inevitably）elevate our self-esteem.
通过做…，我们能够获得一种成就感，这不可避免地能有助自我实现

2.沟通（communication）

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 43:54
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关键词：
people skil人际交往能力
bare ones heart 敞开心扉
关键句：

through/by 通过——，we are able to=can obtain=get harmony和谐of the communication（n+of +the=adj），which（定语从句）can reduce减少the conflict矛盾，冲突and help us bare our heart and make more friends交朋友.

3.健康（health）

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 48:36
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关键词：
factors to sound health健康的要素
contribute to 贡献，促成physical身体上的health有助于身体健康关键句：

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 49:60
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…is a necessary必要 factor to keep health 保持健康.anyway无论如何，health 健康is above wealth 财富，we should discard 摒弃unhealthy habits 习惯in order to为了have a better life.

4.娱乐entertainment/creation/leisure

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 52:30
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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 52:59
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——题目——is a relaxing放松的 way/means方式 to fill 填充my leisure time
.…是填充我休闲时光的一种放松方式
among milons of 大量–——，you can always find something（that）you are interested in.
在.中，你总能够找到你感兴趣的那些事情

5.知识
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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 55:23
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knowledge information信息 experience经验skill技能

————is the main/major source of social information
…是社会的主要信息来源
we are able to get/acquire/gain/obtain获得 more knowledge through/from/by通过——will certainly/undoubtedly无疑broaden our view开阔视野，enrich 丰富 our life and deepen加深 the understanding理解 of the society

6.心理健康health/positive积极的

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 58:47
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————will relieve/reduce减轻peoples stress/pressure压力 and make people（totally）彻底地feel relaxed 。we can adjust oneself to 调整。。。以适应new environment环境and face 面对challenge 挑战confidently自信地by通过——

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 60:26
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7.环境
environment/traffic 交通
protect保护/pollute污染
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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 60:52
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___pose a great threat构成严重威胁to our living生存environment in order to为了maintain维持ecological生态的balance平衡，our environment awareness 意识should be enhanced增强，提高

8.人际relationship/friends

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写作题材梳理，掌握高分句型_2 p2 – 01:02:52
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we can make a lot of friends from different background 来自不同背景的by通过___

逻辑词

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议论文（社会热点）_1 p3 – 05:48
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1.first of all，moreover/furthermore，in the end
2.in the first place，in the second place，in the third place
3.first and foremost，whats more/worse，last but not least
4.on the one hand，on the other hand两个理由
5.for one thing，for another thing

高分句型
一.比较级

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议论文（社会热点）_1 p3 – 08:38
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1.越来越
more and more..
eg. more and more people go to work by bike
练习：空气污染变得越来越严重了
air pollution becomes more and more serious.
2.没有什么比.…更…
nothing is+比较级+than+n/to do/doing sth
eg:nothing is better than money.
nothing is more comfortable than to stay at home
练习：没有什么比学习更重要的了
nothing is more important than to study.
没有什么比网络学习更方便的了。
nothing is more convenient than to study on the line/internet.
3.越….越…
the+比较级+主谓，the+比较级+主谓
越努力，越幸运
the harder we are，the luckier we will be.
学生们参加的兼职工作越多，他们获得的经验也就越多
the more part-time jobs students take part in，the more experience they will get.

二.倒装

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议论文（社会热点）_1 p3 – 21:41
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1.only in this way can sb do只有以这种方式.…才能…
eg:only in this way can we study english well
练习：只有以这种方式我们才能解决这个问题
only in this way can we solve this problem

2.by no means/in no case/in no way/at no time+can sb do 某人绝对
不可以做…
eg:by no means can children be allowed to smoke
练习：人们是绝对不可以污染环境的
at no time can people pollute the environment.
我们是绝对不可以浪费教育资源的。
in no case can we waste the educational resource

三.强调句
it is+被强调部分+that（万能）/who（人+其他正是…怎么样
注意：被强调部分除了不能是动词以外，其余都可以！
eg:i learn english in this room every day.
it is in this room that i learn english every day
练习：正是吸烟对我们的健康造成了损害
-正常句子 smoking is harmful to our health.
it is smoking that is harmful to our health.
正是网络购物给我们带来了便利
online shopping brings us convenience
-it is online shopping that brings us convenience。

四.it句型
1.it is widely/generally/commonly广泛地accepted接受/acknowledged承认/believed认为that..大家普遍认为…
eg:it is widely accepted that walking is good for 对..有好处our health
练习：大家普遍认为通过终身学习我们能够获得很多好处
it is generally acknowledged that we can get/obtain/acquire a lot of benefits/advantages through/by lifelong learning.
大家普遍认为吃太多的快餐会造成疾病
it is commonly accepted that eating too much fast food will cause illness.

2.it/sth cannot be overemphasized
无论如何强调.…都不为过
eg:the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized
练习：无论如何强调安全都不为过
the safety cannot be overemphasized.
无论如何强调环境问题都不为过
the problem/issue of environment cannot be overemphasized

3.it goes without saying that..…
（it is）needless to say（that）…
不用说/不言而喻
eg:it goes without saying that it is worth keeping early hours早起for us.
不言而喻上大学（主语）在我们的成长（时间状语-放最后）中扮演（动
词）着重要的角色（宾语）。
it is needless to say that attending a university plays an important role in our growing process.

五.非限制性定语从句
句子，which +v+其他
eg:cars can save a lot of time，which is limited有限 and precious
注意：当想用because时，替换成which.
练习：我们必须阻止污染，因为这对环境有好处（be good for）
we must stop/prevent/prohibit pollution，which is good for the living environment.
我们最好要坚持练习，因为熟能生巧（make perfects）
we had better keep practice，which makes perfects

六.名词性从句
1.定语从句+表语从句
the reason why+完整句子…is that+完整句子.什么的原
因是什么
eg:the reason why people prefer to愿意 study aboard出国留学 is that they can experience different cultures
练习：我们努力学习的原因是为了上个好大学
the reason why we study hard is that we can/are able to attend a better
college.
练习：越来越多的学生找兼职工作的原因是这能够帮助家里减轻负担
the reason why more and more students find/take part in part-time jobs
is that they are able to help their family reduce burden