备战2018年中考英语书面表达万能模板之写人型记叙文

【写作模板】

【写作注意事项】
a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述；
b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一；
c. 在描写人的外貌时，常用一般现在时，人称常用第一人称或第三人称；
d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。
【写作方法】
第一段：人物介绍：引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如：年龄、外貌、身份、性格等；
第二段：叙述典型事例：通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等；
第三段：对人物的评价：或夸赞或指责或者从事例中得到的感受、启示等。
【亮点巨型】
【篇首句】
1. once there was a… 从前，有一个……
2. …was/were born in/into a poor/rich family.
……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。
3. as a child of.…years old.. 还是个……岁的孩子时……
4. there will be(a party/speech/contest/concert..)to be held by…in.(place)at..(time).
一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办
5. in the past… years… has

impressed me deeply.
在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。
6. in my life the person i will never forget is my father.
在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。
【篇中句】
1. …gives us the im
pression that… ……给我们……印象。
2. …spend his childhood in………在……度过了他的童年。
3. i was about to… when… 我正要……，突然，……
4. hardly had i done… when… /no sooner had i done… than…
我刚……，就……/我一……，就……
5. he worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.
他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
6. he always wears casual clothes like jeans and t-shirt.
他总是穿着像牛仔和t恤之类的便装。
7. her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive.
她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。
8. one day, i … 有一天，我……
【篇尾句】
1. it turns out to be… 结果是……
2. i was very tired, but i was happy that i did a good deed.
我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
3. now i understand my father’s love to me. i will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
4. from

it, i understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.
从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。
【必背范文】
writing1
时光精灵带走了三年相伴的岁月，却给我们留下了满满的收获。作为实验人你一定学到了很多，成长了很多。请以＂i’m a wonderful teenager＂为题，写一篇文章，描述一下现在的你。
要求：1. 从自己拥有的优秀品质、特长爱好等方面描写；
2. 不能出现真实姓名、班级、校名；
3. 语言流畅、情感真挚；
4.不少于80词。
i’m a wonderful teenager
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【思路分析】
这是一篇材料作文，介绍一下在实验经历了三年的成长后自己的现状。根据写作要求，可以从自己拥有的优秀品质、特长爱好等方面去描写，需要自由发挥的地方较多，在时态的选择上要以一般现在时态为主，人称自然是第一人称单数。注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
i’m a wonderful teenager
i am a 15-year-old student in junior grade3.though i am occupied with mu study,i would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the internet.
one of my favorite hobbies is reading. reading has been in my life for many years, since i began to learn characters. it can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my reading ability. when reading, i can learn a lot. by reading shakespeare’s works, i know what hamlet looks like. reading socrates, i can see how great ancient greek philosophers are. reading lu xun, i come back to the old time of china.
i am sure to continue reading, so i can lead a colourful life.
writing 2
初中三年，你的生活中有很多人帮助过你。你最想感谢的人是谁？他/她是个什么样的人？你为什么要感谢他/她？你有什么想对他/她说的吗？请你以此为题，写一篇文章。
提示：
1. who is he/she?
2. what is he/she like?
3. why do you want to thank him/her?
4. what do you want to say?
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4. 词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
during my junior high school life, the most memorable person is ____________________________________
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【思路分析】
本文需要对初中三年给予你帮助的人说谢谢，并阐述他是如何帮助你的。内容需包括：他是谁，他怎么样，为什么感谢他，有什么话要对他说，四个部分。人称使用第一人称，时态主要使用一般现在时。文章内容全面，衔接得当，用了恰当的连接词，what’s more, so。也用了比较复杂的句型，各种状语从句如if i have some problems with english study, she will explain them to me again and again. 是一篇优秀的范文。
【参考范文】
during my junior high school life, the most memorable person is ms wang.ms wang is my english teacher. she is kind and friendly. she is not only our teacher but also our friend. in class, she teaches us how to learn english well. while after class, she talks with us about her favorite pop stars happily. she is also hard-working. she always makes her class so interesting that i like to have her class a lot. what’s more, she is patient. if i have some problems with english study, she will explain them to me again and

again. till i can solve them on my own. little by little, my english has made great progress. so i thank her very much.
soon, i will leave this school, i think i will remember her forever.
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