高考英语作文模板
高考英语作文模板
注意事项:
????? 【1】高考作文不是临场发挥,而是早有准备!好作文是可以背出来的!
????? 【2】训练高考作文步骤:
?????????? 1. 练字→ 2. 背模板→ 3.不断在考试中练习,不断熟练
????? 【3】高考作文常用语法:
?????????? 1. 非谓语动词
????? 常见:1)不定式做目的状语;
???????????????? 2)现在分词做伴随状语;
???????????????? 3)形容词的状语用法:
e.g.?? interested in … , i’m writing for…
?????????? 2. 定语从句(限制性和非限制性)
???????????????? p.s. 其实,我比较推荐使用非限制性定语从句,因为这样批卷老师能容易发现你使用的高级句式(,后面就是which,老师很容易看出是非限制性定语从句。只要从句不出大的语法错误,很容易会当作加分项。)
?????????? 3. 倒装句
???????????????? 特指一些比较容易掌握而且还百搭的,例如:
not only … , but also … .
?????????? 4. 强调句
???????????????? 需要掌握强调句中各个成分的方法。
?????????? 5. 一些重要的连接词(however, besides…)
一、申请信
【1】基本逻辑
听说你要人,我要来试试。
我有很多优点,别人都说好。
期待你回复,畅想未来。
【2】模板(注:标红色是特别注意的语法,记住这些语法,模板更好背哦!)
【第一段】
????? interested in your recently advertised position for …/hearing that you are looking for …,
????? i’m gladly writing to apply for the job/ position.
【第二段】
????? having acquired a good knowledge of …, i’m confident that i am qualified to … .
????? …(adj.) and …(adj.), i do believe that i can … well.
????? i used to help … finish …, which … .
【第三段】
????? i’d appreciate it if i’m offered the opportunity/ you could accept my application.
????? if given the opportunity to be the … (职业), i will spare no effort to do everything i can.
????? i’m looking forward to your reply!
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
(2019全国i卷)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 能做的事情。
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dear sir or madam,
i’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the chinese painting exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.
(interested in chinese traditional painting/hearing that the chinese painting exhibition will be hold in local art gallery, i’m gladly writing to apply to be a volunteer in your gallery.)
i think i am qualified for this job, because i have learned chinese painting since childhood. (having acquired a good knowledge of chinese painting, i have learned chinese painting since childhood, and i am confident that i can introduce the paintings well to the visitors.) besides, i am fluent in both chinese and english, which is beneficial for introducing chinese paintings. if i am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, i can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about chinese paintings.
i would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. i’m looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板(背诵时注意,不是给的模板都要背,只要背会自己熟悉的一套即可。比如:开头我们给出了两个功能一样的句型模板,你只需要熟练掌握一种即可。),练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
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二、邀请信 ??(通知)
【1】基本逻辑
听说你对…感兴趣,我写信邀请你。
介绍活动情况及流程。
你能来真是太好了,期待回信。
【2】模板
【第一段】(何时何地啥活动,我邀请你)——表明来意
????? there will be … to be held in … . i’d like to invite you to take part in it and enjoy great fun.
????? there will be … to be held in … . hearing that you have a great interest in … , i’m writing to invite you … .(纯粹的万用模板套话)
????? i’m writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to participate in … .
????? i’m more than(=very) pleased to invite you to join in … .
【第二段】(介绍活动细节——活动目的、活动流程等)
????? the activity is to promote … .(活动目的)
????? the activity is scheduled to last … (时长) , from 几点 to 几点.(活动时间)
????? to begin with, there will be …(活动细节安排,可配合定语从句使用). (then, we will … . at last, we plan to … .这两句比较粗糙,注意连接词的使用,而且需要注意避免句型重复)
????? i do believe that you can get a lot from the activity.(注意:这是一句套话,增强邀请的意思)
【第三段】
????? i’ll be grateful if you can accept my invitation. i do hope you will seize the opportunity to join … .
????? i’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.
????? i’m looking forward to your reply!
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
假定你是李华,想邀请邀请外教henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
dear henry, im very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about chinese paper-cutting exhibition,which will start on june 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week.(there will be a chinese paper-cutting exhibition to be held in art center on june 20. i’d like to invite you to take part in it and enjoy great fun there.)
as is well-known to us all,chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and im sure you will be interested in it,so i plan to invite you to pay a close visit.(as we all know, chinese paper-cutting is a traditional art with a long history. )the exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in china.during the activity,i will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about chinese traditional culture.(to begin with, there will be a paper-cutting show, which is performed by a chinese traditional art team. then, we will visit the art gallery, which is decorated with paper-cuttings. at last, we can make a traditional paper-cutting by ourselves. i do believe that you can get a lot from the activity.) would you please have a look at the exhibition with me?im looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.(i’ll be grateful if you can accept my invitation. i do hope you will seize the opportunity to join such a good activity. i’m looking forward to your reply!) yours, li hua
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【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板,练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
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三、求助信
【1】基本逻辑
问候+表明来意。
介绍自己情况,描述自身问题,寻求他人帮助。
你能帮我太好了,期待回信。
【2】模板
【第一段】
????? how’s everything going? / how is it going these days?(问候他人,基本礼貌)
(注:朋友、亲友问how is it going? 类;老师、外教等要自我介绍)
????? i’m li hua, a student in your class/ from your … class last year.(自我介绍,让老师知道你是那个学生。总的来说,看见名字不一定能想起你,就要加自我介绍)
????? i’m writing to ask you for help because of a trouble, which disturbed me for a long time. (表明来意寻求帮助)
????? recently, i … . the problem has disturbed me for a long time, so i have no choice but turn to you for help. (表明来意寻求帮助)
【第二段】(注意描述问题时的逻辑)to begin with—besides—what’s more
?????? (第一句介绍自己情况,自由发挥,推荐使用一些时态语态和从句。比如:现在完成时、定语从句等)
????? (从第二句开始介绍自己困难)
????? to begin with, … has always been a big headache for me, which … .
????? besides, i also have difficulty in doing …/ i also have problems to do … .
????? what’s more, the problem that … has been troubled me for a long time, so that i have no idea to solve it.
(这里注意两件事:第一是逻辑上的连接词;第二是说明困难的说法有几种,例如上文就举例了你所遇到的三重困难)
【第三段】
????? i would be more than delighted / i’d appreciate it if you could give me some tips on … . (表示感激)
????? i am sincerely looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. / i’m looking forward to your reply!(期待回信)
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给tom写一封电子邮件:
1.询问tom的生活和学习情况;
2.谈谈你的困难并请tom帮忙;
3.告诉tom你打算赛后去看他。
dear tom,
how is it going these days? i keep wondering how you feel about your school life in beijing. have you got used to the life in china? are you enjoying your life? i hope you are.
(i’m more than glad hearing that you come to beijing for study. how do you feel about your school life and the life in china?)
let me tell you a piece of good news: i’m going to take part in an english speech contest of middle school students in july in the coming summer vacation. so i’m busy preparing for it. (recently, i prepared for a speech contest, but met some problems, which have disturbed me for a long time. so i have no choice but turn to you for help.) but now i have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper english words to express my thoughts. (to begin with, collecting useful information has always been a big headache for me. besides, i also have difficulty in how to express my thought properly.) besides, i really want to improve my spoken english, especially the pronunciation and intonation. of course, as a native english speaker, you can give me some suggestions. in addition, i’m going to visit you after the contest. (your spoken english is so good that i do believe that you can give me some useful advice on my speech contest. in addition, i’m going to visit you after the contest.)
i’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in beijing! i can hardly wait to see you! i am looking forward to your early reply. (i would be more than delighted if you could give me some tips on my poor spoken english. i am sincerely looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. / i’m looking forward to your reply!)
yours,
li hua
【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板,练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
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四、建议信(求助信的回信)
【1】基本逻辑
听说你遇到困难了,我来帮助你。(表明来意,引出下文)
提出建议,介绍方法。
真挚希望问题解决,期待回信。
【2】模板
【第一段】
hearing that …(对方的困难 you have difficulty in doing sth), i’m writing to provide some useful advice for you/ offer you some help.(表明来意)
my advice is as follows. (my suggestions are as follows)/ perhaps the following suggestions will help you a lot./be helpful to you. (引出下文)
【第二段】(注意逻辑连接词的使用)
<连接词>①最基本版:firstly,–secondly, — at last,…
?????????? ②一般常见版:to begin with,–besides, –what’s more,…
?????????? ③四六级常用:first and foremost,– what’s more,–after all,…
<提建议>
i suggest that you should do …, +定从(例:i suggest that you should practice more with your teachers, who can give you more useful/ practical measures.)
????? you’d better do … (建议), through which you can …(你得到的好处).
????? doing … (建议)maybe also help you a lot, because … (好处).
????? if i were you, i would …, because… .
【第三段】
????? i do hope that my advice/ suggestions will work and you will solve the problem earlier.
????? i will be more than pleased if you can work the problem out.
????? hope things work out!
????? i’m looking forward to your reply!
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
你的英国朋友jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
dear jim,
i’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to china.(i’m glad to receive you letter hearing that you are coming to china for a visit. i’m writing to give you some suggestions about which way you choose. my suggestions are as follows.)
of the two trips to the yangtze river and mount tai, both are highly recommended. (the trip to yangtze river and the journey to mount tai are both interesting/excellent.) personally(in my opinion,/ in my view,), i prefer the tour along the yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of chinese civilization. you can learn a lot about the history of china and chinese people. (i suggest that you should choose the trip to mount tai, where you can admire the amazing sunrise in the morning.) moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. (what’s more, choosing this trip, you can admire not only the beauty of nature but also the cute lives living in the forest.)that’s why i think the trip along the yangtze will be a better choice.
hope you’ll have a good time in china.( i do hope that my suggestions will help you choose a good way for trip and you will have a good time in china. i’m looking forward to your reply! )
yours
li hua
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【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板,练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
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五、感谢信
【1】基本逻辑
表明来意,我是来感谢你的。
表示感谢。
再次表示感谢,衷心祝福。
【2】模板
【第一段】
????? i’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for the kindness you have shown for me in …(活动)+定从./ which helps me (…) a lot./ in …(活动 the english contest), +定从(e.g. where i made a successful performance and become the winner.).
im writing to express my thanks to you for …( doing).
【第二段】
????? i do believe that/ i am convinced that it is just because of your kind help that i can get such a great success.
????? it is so kind/nice of you to do(帮助),+定从./that 从句.
????? (it is so kind of you to spend your spare time practicing spoken english with me, which made me become the champion of the contest.)
????? with your unselfish help, i not only …(你的成长与收获become a winner in the contest), but also …(你的成长与收获get such a great improvement in my spoken english).
【第三段】
????? please accept my sincere thanks again. best wishes.
????? please allow me to express my sincere thanks to your timely help. best wishes.
thank you for what you have done for me. best wishes.
again, i would like to express my warm thanks for your timely help. best wishes!
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
假定你是学生会主席李华, 学生会举办了英语戏剧节(english drama festival),得到了外教miss brown的大力帮助。活动圆满结束后,请给她写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 外教的帮助;
3. 同学的收获。
dear miss brown,
i’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school english drama festival, which has turned out to be an amazing success.( i’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school english drama festival, where our class made a great success.)
it’s so nice of you to have offered us a class of presentation skills and basic stage techniques. (it is so kind of you to spend your spare time practicing spoken english with us, which made us become the champion of the drama contest.) under your professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance. some students overcame the fear of acting in front of audience and gained tremendous confidence. others developed communication skills and knew how to cooperate in a team. most importantly, this activity has fueled our passion for english drama. ( with your unselfish help, we not only get a great improvement in performing the interesting english drama, but also realized/ admired the beauty of the english drama.)
many thanks for your time and support again. (again, i would like to express my warm thanks for your timely help. best wishes!)
yours,
li hua
【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板,练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
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六、道歉信(一般不是你犯了错误,而是你无法接受他人邀请)
【1】基本逻辑
表明来意(道歉)。(万用模板)
表明原因,补救措施,真挚道歉。
再次表达歉意。
【2】模板
【第一段】(表明来意)
i’m writing to express my apology/ regret that … .
????? i’m very sorry to tell you that … .
????? i would like to give/ offer/ express you my apology for … / that … .
pleas
e accept my sincere apology to you. (引出下文)
【第二段】
i should have been able to …(accept your invitation/ attend your meeting/ take part in your party), but due to the fact that (=because) …(原因), i’ll have to … .
due to the fact that … , i can’t …/ have no choice but to …(若出现可进行解释说明的词语可添加定语从句进行限定).
(注:如果还有其他原因,就是用and/what’s more等进行连接)
(e.g. i should have been able to attend your lecture, but due to the fact that something urgent happened, is the first time that my aunt has returned to my hometown since she studied abroad several years ago. so i have no choice/option but to cancel the appointment with you/ decline your invitation/ refuse your invitation/ turn down your invitation.) (请关注例句的逻辑链接以及句型运用)
(如果有补救措施)if it is convenient for you, lets have another appointment to do … .
(希望对方理解)i hope you can understand my situation.
【第三段】
????? please allow me to say sorry again.
????? please allow me to express my sincere apology to you again.
????? i will be grateful if you can accept my apology.
????? i sincerely hope you can accept my apology.
????? i do hope that you can accept my apology.
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
假如你是李华。你和外教christina原定于本周六上午一起参加"中国传统文化日"活动。但因故你不能履约,请根据下面的写作提示,用英语给她发一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.告诉她不能履约;
2.解释爽约的原因;
3.希望她谅解。
dear christina,
i am li hua. i’m writing to apologize to you for not being able to participate in the "chinese traditional culture day" activity to be held on the saturday morning with you as we planned last week.( i’m writing to express my sincere apology to you for not being able to attend the “chinese traditional culture day” activity, which will be held on the saturday morning. please accept my apology to you.)
to be honest, i wish i could join in the activity, but i am afraid i will not be available because i was informed yesterday that i would have to go to beijing for a contest on the morning of saturday. that is why i can’t go with you. i am awfully sorry for breaking my promise and i apologize for any inconvenience it brings to you. i hope you can understand me. ( due to the fact that my aunt is coming back from england on the saturday morning, i’ll have to go to the airport and pick her up (welcome her). so i have no choice but to cancel our appointment. i hope you can understand my situation.)
wish you a good time there. ( please allow me to say sorry again. i sincerely hope you can accept my apology.)
yours,
li hua
【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板,练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
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七、通知(变向的邀请信,对象从个人到群体)【注重格式!注重格式!注重格式!】
【1】基本逻辑
把活动需要介绍的都介绍到位。
活动(时间、地点、内容、目的)
【2】模板
介绍目的:aiming to/ in order to/ to do …(目的), we plan to/ are going to … . / … will be held in …(地点) on … (时间on sunday morning).
引出下文:some relevant details are as follows.
活动内容因题而异:你可以使用邀请信的逻辑连接词写活动流程,也可以套用定语从句限定一些关键词,以及not only … , but also … 句型。
the activity is to promote … .(活动目的)
????? the activity is scheduled to last … (时长) , from 几点 to 几点.(活动时间)
????? to begin with, there will be …(活动细节安排,可配合定语从句使用). (then, we will … . at last, we plan to … .这两句比较粗糙,注意连接词的使用,而且需要注意避免句型重复)
????? we do believe that you can get a lot from the activity.(注意:这是一句套话,增强邀请的意思)
希望大家踊跃报名/ 希望大家准时到场 /祝愿大家玩的开心
we are convinced that you can have a good time there.
please attend our meeting on time. don’t be late!
if you have any question, please call me at 888-8888.
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号中为我们所做的修改)
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片growing together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展:
2.放映时间、地点:
3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
notice
recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. welcome to join us end enjoy it! here are some relevant details about it.
(aiming to make our student have a better understanding of the development/ history of our school, we are going to screen/invite you to see a film named growing together in classroom 502 on saturday morning. some relevant details are as follows.)
to begin with, the name of the movie is growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on june 9th. what’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
(the film is about the development of our school, which has hundreds years history. if you have any question about our film, you will have a chance to express your thought to the headmaster in person and you are welcome to write your own opinion to us.)
hopefully, you would make it to our activity. i have the confidence that you will have a great time.
(we are convinced that you can have a good time there/ you can get a lot knowledge from our film.)
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the student union
【4】作业任务
课下背诵模板,练习相关作文题目,可以翻看模板套作。如果对自己要求较高,就背诵好后,独立完成作文。
八、投诉信(变相的求助信,只是态度更坚决)
【1】基本逻辑
自我介绍,表明来意。
描述问题。
提出解决方法,期待回复。
【2】模板
【第一段】
自我介绍:
i’m li hua, … (定语从句等 e.g. i’m li hua, a 17-year-old boy, who has bought a … in your store/ experienced a service in your restaurant.)
表明来意:
????? i feel bad to trouble you but i’m afraid that i must make a complaint about it.
i’m writing to express my disappointment about …, which disturbed/ puzzled me a lot these days.
【第二段】
????? there are several aspects causing my dissatisfaction.
????? (逻辑连接词+问题)
<连接词复习>①最基本版:firstly,–secondly, — at last,…
?????????? ②一般常见版:to begin with,–besides, –what’s more,…
????? ③四六级常用:first and foremost,– what’s more,–after all
问题描述:(至少可以描述三个问题,并表达你的期望)
??? 定语/宾语从句:as a customer, i can’t bear/ stand the attitude that your waiter/ staff provided for me./ i can’t accept (the truth) that the phone i has just brought from your online store is broken. not only …, but also … : not only can’t the phone ring when i receive any call, but also i can’t send or receive text messages. 强调句(表达期望用):i do believe that you can provide me with a better service and help me solve my problems.
【第三段】
i’d appreciated it if you could …(你的要求). i’m looking forward to your early reply.
【3】范文(注:所选例文来自网络,括号内为我们所做的修改)
假如你是李华,昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇,回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时,该营业员对你的态度恶劣,对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信。
dear manager, (i’m li hua, who has just bought an electric fun in your shop.) i feel sorry to trouble you but i am afraid that i have to make a complaint. yesterday i bought an electric fan in your shop, but when i got home and turned it on, it didnt work. so i took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. to my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it.
(there are several aspects causing my dissatisfaction. first and foremost, as a customer, i can’t accept the truth that the fun i has just brought from your shop is broken. what’s more, the attitude your staff provided for me was so rude that he didn’t answer any questions i have. i do believe that you can help me solve this problem.) generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why i bought the electric fan in your shop. i was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop. i am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.
(i’d appreciated it if you could help me fix my broken fun up/ replace my broken fun. i’m looking forward to your early reply.) sincerely yours, li hua
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