研究生复试时英文自我介绍一般要怎么介绍比较得体

为一个英语六级考了6次才勉强飘过的英语渣渣，口语更是惨不忍睹！为了复试的英语口语，真的焦虑的我从考研开始一直到复试结束~再出初始成绩后，就开始着手写了英语的自我介绍，反复修改，再加上每天背个几遍，直至滚瓜烂熟，才稳稳当当的通过了复试~下面，我就分享一下当年血和泪交织中换来的经验~
首先，自己先找一些好的自我介绍模板，然后结合自己的自身情况进行修改整理，不建议写的太复杂，因为英语口语不是作文，不需要写的花里胡哨的，用一些简单的单词和句子即可，读起来顺畅老师听得懂就行了。
然后，找一些英语大神对自

己的自我介绍进行修改，我当初是找了个浙大的博士大佬和英语专业的硕士姐姐进行了多次修改才得到的最终版本。接下来就是使劲背背背完事，一定要滚瓜烂熟！！
最后，我还让浙大大佬（口语极好）给我录了一段音频，每天听他的录音模仿朗读，自己还会录音听哪里发的音不对，虽然自己口语不行，依葫芦画瓢总行的吧~
以下大家可参考一下：（仅供参考！仅供参考！仅供参考！！！）
Hello everyone, my name is XX, and is my honor to briefly introduce myself.（简单开个场）
I come from Hangzhou, and she is named heaven on earth as well as Suzhou. I am greatly attracted by scenery of Suzhou, which is a wonderful city to live and study. （介绍自己的家乡，然后夸一波学校的城市）
I am warm hearted, and willing to give a help hand to others who was in trouble. In my spare time, I take active part in volunteer jobs, and bring smiles and warms when giving help. Of course, it is makes me happy, too.（介绍自己的性格、优点等）
I majoring in XX, and will soon graduate from XX. In my point of view, I believe XX will be a trend in the future. I also have great interest in XX, and would like to make some contributions in this field.

Up to now, I realized that what I learnt is not enough for this target, so I need to front study in this region. （介绍专业、毕业院校、对考取专业的看法、志向以及目的）
As is well known, Soochow university is an outstanding college with perfect atmosphere and highly qualified faculty. So if I am lucky to admitted to Soochow university, I will immerse myself in this region and make efforts to master my research subject. （夸一波考的院校以及录取后的计划）
That is all of my introduction, thanks for your attention.（简单收个尾）
因为我的口语实在不好，所以我写的很简单，没有介绍自己本科的经历以及荣誉之类的，一是很多专业名词太难了，二是害怕给自己挖坑，怕老师揪住某一点使劲问（真的会！！）
祝各位考研er复试顺利~不管结果怎样，一切都会是最好的安排~