精华!2021高考英语作文真题及满分范文汇总_during(2021高项通过率)
原标题：精华！2021高考英语作文真题及满分范文汇总
今日，和我们共享2021年高考英语真题一切英语作文及满分优良范文。赶忙保藏起来好好学习吧！
1. 全国ⅰ卷
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办我国画展。请写一封信请求做自愿者，内容包括：
1．写信意图：2．自个优势：3．能做的作业。
1．词数100支配；2．可以恰当添加细节，以使行文联接；
3．结束语已为你写好。
【优良满分范文】
dear sir/madam,
i’m li hua, an exchange student from china during this summer vacation. i’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. now i’m writing to apply for the position.
the reasons for my application are as follows. first of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, i can communicate freely with others in english. what’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. the most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique chinese art form.
all in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. i’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
li hua
【写作解析】
这篇书面表达归于使用文中的请求信类型，可以依照请求信的思路来写，一起要留心电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
首要要进行毛遂自荐，扼要奉告写作背就连阐明写信意图。
第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示无缺地体现出来，文章用first of all，what’s more, the most important factor is that 等过渡性规划天然地串联三个要害。一起要留心句式的多样化与高档词汇的使用。
最终需要运用求职信的常用套话及函件的常用套话结束。
2. 全国ⅱ卷
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件奉告你的队友chris球队近期将参加竞赛，内容包括：
1. 竞赛信息；
2. 赛前预备；
3. 表达等待。
【满分优良范文】
how is everything going? i have good news to tell you. a volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.
as for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. what will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.
so excited am i that i can’t wait to join in it.how about you? looking forward to your reply.
li hua
【写作辅导】
本题需求：作为排球队队长李华，给队友chris写一封邮件奉告他近期球队将参加竞赛，首要的要害包括三项，别离是：竞赛信息、赛前预备、表达等待。字数需求100支配，考生应恰当添加细节，以使行文联接。作文的难度不大，可以活络运用学过的高档短语和句型，例如定语从句；名词性从句；非谓语动词；倒装句等等。另外要留心联接词汇的运用以使行文联接；高档词汇的运用以前进作品的层次。
3. 全国ⅲ卷
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件聘请你的英国兄弟allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时刻；
2. 活动组织；
3. 等待他扮演节目。
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【优良满分范文】
dear allen,
how is everything going? our school will hold a music festival next sunday morning in the school hall. and i’m writing to invite you to join us.
the opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. you are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
looking forward to your early reply.
best wishes,
li hua
【写作辅导】
本年的书面表达需求考生写邮件，奉告英国兄弟音乐节的情况。
首要断定提纲。先介绍写作意图，之后介绍音乐节的时刻、活动组织等具体信息，最终等待他扮演节目。
第二，根据提纲，断定要害词语，如：how is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，the opening ceremony等。
第三，留心选用适合的联接词将各要害串联起来。
【点评】
这篇文章内容无缺，详略稳当。并运用了高档句式。如：you are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. 定语从句。前进了文章层次。
4. 北京卷
第一节 (15分)
51. 假定你是红星大学高三学生李华。你的英国老友jim方案暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅行，发来邮件问询有关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；
2.必备衣物。
留心:
1.词数不少于50；
2.最初和结束现已给出，不计入总词数。
dear jim，
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li hua
【优良满分范文】
dear jim,
i’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in china.
i suggest that you begin from beijing, and i’ll show you around. tianjin will be your next stop. after that, you can go to shanghai, where you can stay for a week. you can take high-speed trains to both cities.
summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
looking forward to your arrival.
li hua
【写作辅导】
红星大学高三学生李华的英国老友jim方案暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅行，发来邮件问询有关信息。需求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。这篇文章时态应选用一般如今时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三有些来写：首要表达等待jim来我国；然后奉告交通出行和必备衣物；最终期望兄弟的到来。留心运用高档词汇和句式，为文章添加颜色；留心运用联接词、联接词，使文章天然、流通。
【点评】
这篇文章内容无缺，言语表述流通。文章运用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in china.和that you begin from beijing, and i’ll show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.对错捆绑性定语从句。
第二节(20分)
52. 假定你是红星大学高三学生李华。你们班上星期组织了一次以“劳作最光彩”为主题的社会实习活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后次序，写一篇英文周记，记叙整个进程。
留心:词数不少于60。
提示词:西瓜watermelon
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【优良满分范文】
last week i took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
at the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “working is most beautiful”. and he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
when i got home, i packed up my luggage for the trip.
on the farm, we helped pick watermelons. while working, i realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
when i came back home, i shared my experiences with my parents. and they were very proud of me.
【写作辅导】
假定你是红星大学高三学生李华，你们班上星期组织了一次以“劳作最光彩”为主题的社会实习活动。需求根据以下四幅图的先后次序，写一篇英文周记，记叙整个进程。图像作文内容要害比照清楚，其间包括：教师宣告活动内容和意义，我为活动预备，在农场的劳作进程，介绍活动感触。这样有利于学生写作时发扬与拓宽。全文可分红三有些，最初段归纳活动，中心段描绘图像，结束段总结收成和意义。文章用第一人称来写，运用一般曩昔时。
【点评】
这篇文章内容无缺，言语表述通畅。运用了联接词、联接词，使文章天然、流通。文章运用了宾语从句 how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.还运用了 at the class meeting, when i got home, on the farm, while working, when i came back home等过渡词。
5. 浙江卷
第四有些 写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节 使用文写作(满分15分)
66. 假定你是李华，常常协助你学习英语的兄弟alex即将回来自个的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 标明谢谢；
2. 回想alex对你的协助；
3. 临别祝福。
1. 词数80支配；
2. 可恰当添加细节，以使行文联接。
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【满分优良范文】
dear alex,
learning that you’re leaving for the united states soon, i’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. under your professional guidance, i have made such unbelievable progress in english. it’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent english speech contest. whenever i encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for english and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. no words are strong enough to convey how grateful i am.
thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
li hua
【写作辅导】
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达归于使用文。需求考生写谢谢信，人称运用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般如今时。
2. 谋篇规划
函件格局，称号和落款文中现已给出。首段，写信的意图，中心段回想alex对你的协助；最终一段表达祝福。
3. 要害词和语句
根据写作要害及构思好的提纲咱们可以初步断定文章可以运用到的词汇和语句有：leaving for the united states soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。经过词汇烘托，咱们就很简略地行文了，文章写完之后要查看文中是不是存在拼写或语法差错。
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
67. 阅览下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词支配的内容概要。
parents everywhere praise their kids. jenn berman, author of the a to z guide to raising happy and confident kids, says, “we’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” by giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.
still, don’t go too far in the other direction. not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
so what is the right amount of praise? experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. if praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “we should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says donahue, author of parenting without fear: letting go of worry and focusing on what really matters. “one thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.”
your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. but if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. but whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相等的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
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【参阅答案】
parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. (要害一) yet, both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging. (要害二) when giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. (要害三) similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they’re involved in. (要害四)
【写作辅导】
结束一篇概要写作，需要经过三个进程，
1. 读懂原文，捉住期间主题句。在阅览进程中，需要精确掌控文章的期间粗心，学会除去非重要信息，弄理解不一样体裁的文章的内部逻辑联络以及文章的华章规划。
2. 组织言语，变换表达。在找到主题句清楚全文中心的基础上，组织好言语，注重言语表达的独立性和精确性以及高档性，不全盘照抄原文语句，尽量用自个的言语变换表达，一起要留心篇幅的比例组织，用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3. 通读全文，逻辑联接。要紧记各期间要害之间的逻辑联络和天然联接，用恰当的相关词去联接全文。
6. 江苏卷
81. 请阅览下面文字，并依照需求用英语写一篇150词支配的文章。
li jiang: have you heard this? a group of exchange students from the uk are visiting our school next month.
su hua: yes, i have. some are already recommending the traditional chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.
li jiang:but it seems people have different opinions.
su hua: what do you think?
li jiang: i think it’s a good idea. it’s an opportunity to make the chinese culture better known to international students.
su hua: i agree. but we don’t have to dress that way. that’s not our daily style. besides, it’s not very convenient.
li jiang: you see, it’s the chinese culture that the british friends are coming for. just the right occasion.
su hua: i prefer the school uniform. it’s nice. it’s also a better display of our school culture.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词归纳上述信息的首要内容；
2. 在上述场合，你是不是倾向于穿我国传统服装？请阐明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作需求】
1. 写作进程中不能直接引证原文语句；
2. 作文中不能呈现真实名字和学校称号；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容无缺，言语标准，语篇联接，词数恰当。
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【优良满分范文一】
li jiang and su hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the british students next month. li recommends the traditional chinese dress while su prefers the school uniform.
i would be happy to wear traditional chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. firstly, this is precisely what the british visitors are expecting. they come to learn about chinese culture with their own eyes. their chinese peers in the typical chinese dress would be highly impressive. the school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique chinese flavour. secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share chinese culture. it is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
the traditional chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very chinese and inviting to the british guests.
【优良满分范文二】
li jiang and su hua don’t agree on what to wear when greeting the british students. li suggests traditional chinese clothes while su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
i prefer the school uniform to the traditional chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. although the traditional chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. we feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. what’s more, the traditional chinese dress can’t reflect the unique culture of our school. from the design and colour of our uniforms, the british friends will learn more about our school. besides, the choice of the traditional chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
so the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional chinese dress for such an occasion.
【写作辅导】
这篇文章是读写使命，本年的论题是关于我国传统服装的。读写使命首要要写好归纳。归纳短文的内容要害实为客观扼要地转述作者的观念、论据和结论，归纳包括两个有些：主题句和支撑句。归纳留心要捉住要害，言语精练，不能添加自个的见地，可是要用自个的言语归纳。
第二段用恰当的过渡语引出自个的观念（对立或撑持）。过渡语起承上启下的作用，要显天然、联接。提出自个的观念后要具体证明自个的观念。
最终一段要总结观念，提出具体做法或呼唤，前进文章的主题。
7. 上海卷
directions: write an english compositionin 120-150 words according to the instructions given in chinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所〔博物馆仍是社区图书馆〕搜集大众定见，假定你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的主意。你的信有必要满足以下需求：
1.简述你写信的意图及你对场所的选择；
2.阐明你的理由〔从便当性，专业性等方面临这两个场所进行比照〕
【优良满分范文】
to whom it may concern:
i’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. i’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.
in my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in shanghai museum than in community libraries. my reasons are as follows.
on one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to shanghai museum which is located in the center of the city. and the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.
on the other hand, as a well-known museum, shanghai museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.
therefore, i suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.
wangmin
【点评】
本次高考作文查询观念论说，题型较为常见，需求对画展的展出场所做出选择，而且阐明理由，而且现已提示了可以从便当性和专业性两个视点来分析，难度不算太大，要写好这篇作文，只需观念清楚而且言之有理即可。
范文依照函件的方法，首要要提出给收信人，towhomitmayconcern这儿标明的是敬启者，是在读者身份不明时用在函件、告诉和证明书最初的套语，也是除了dearxxx之外英语函件的常见用语。
信的第一段交待了自个的身份，而且阐明晰些这封信的意图。
第二段清楚提出了自个的观念，用了itismoreadvisabletodo…句型，阐明“……是更合理的”，常用在提出主张时。期间最终用myreasonsareasfollows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论说。
第【三】四段用ononehand…ontheotherhand…“一方面……；另一方面……”进行联接，层次理解。在论说观念时连词的运用可以使逻辑显得更清楚。第三段从便当性视点进行分析，博物馆交通更便当而且环境更舒畅，其间用到了which引导的非限制性定语从句。第四段从专业性视点阐明博物馆的优势。
最终一段用therefore简略总结偏重申自个的观念。
8. 天津卷
假定你是晨光大学的李津，英国友爱校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动时刻，英方教师chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容寻求你校学生的定见。请根据以下提示给chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜爱的讲座论题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该论题的缘由及关于该论题你感快乐喜爱的内容；
（3）期望从中有何收成。
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可恰当参加细节，使内容充分、行文联接；
（3）最初和结束已给出、不计入总词数。
i’m li jim, a student at chenguang high school.
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thank you for your time.
li jin
【解析】
本篇书面需求写一封聘请信。写作的时分要留心以下几点：一、动笔前，必定要细心分析要害，了解要害要表达的意义，不能遗失要害，跑题偏题。内容要害包括：1. 代表快乐喜爱小组宣告聘请；2. 介绍竞赛的时刻、地址等组织；3. 阐明聘请他的缘由，包括chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他练习方案将发送其邮箱，请他提出主张。二、写作时留心精确运用时态，关于这篇文章来说，以一般将来时为主，上下辞意思联接，契合逻辑联络，尽量运用自个了解的单词句式，一起也要留心运用高档词汇和高档句型使文章显得更有层次。
【写作辅导】
主张信留心思项
1. 审题：
断定文章体裁：主张信
人称：一般以第一人称为主
时态：一般如今时和一般将来时为主
2. 断定文章规划：
篇首句：阐明写信意图；
篇中句：介绍概况、提出具体主张；
篇尾句：提出期望采用主张，并祝福；
本篇书面表达需求考生写一封电子邮件，为半翻开式作文。可分为三段来写：
第一段：论题+观念（得知啥消息+写电子邮件啥意图）；
第二段：具体内容（介绍你喜爱的讲座论题，选择该论题的缘由及关于该论题你感快乐喜爱的内容等）；
第三段：总结和期望（期望从中有何收成等）。
【好词好句】
篇首句：阐明写信意图
1. i’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. such problems are quite normal. perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很怅惘传闻你在习气新学校方面有困难。这样的疑问是很正常的。可以下面的主张会有一些协助。
2. i have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to china for ten days next month. perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我现已收到了你的来信。信上说你方案下个月来赏识我国十天。可以下面的主张对你是有协助的。
3. i’m writing to you to present what i think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).
我给你写信是想阐明一下我关于进一步改进咱们旅馆的一些主意，以招引更多顾客。
4. you have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn chinese, and i will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语问询我的主张，那么我就在这儿给出一些主张。
篇中句：介绍概况、提出具体主张
1. i’d like to suggest that… 我想要主张……
2. in my opinion,… 在我看来，……
3. if i were you, i would… 假定我是你，我会……
4. you’d better do…/not do… 你最佳/最佳不……
5. it’s necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. with more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of chinese history and culture.
在你来亲眼看到这些当地之前，你有必要读一些关于这些当地的书。有了关于这些当地更多的常识，你将会非常好的了解我国的前史和文明。
6. first of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首要，你大约细心听教师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时温习。
7. as is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance. you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
众所周知，词汇对错常重要的。你大约早上花半个小时的时刻背单词和朗读课文。
8. what’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in english out of class. only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken english quickly.
还有，试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只需这样，你才干够很快的前进英语听力和口语。
9. last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written english and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
最终但也是很重要的一点是，你大约养成记日记的习气，这会协助你前进英语写作，也会协助你温习学过的单词和短语。
篇尾句：提出期望采用主张，并祝福
1. i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
2. best wishes!
(给你)最夸姣的祝福!
3. i hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. i would be more than happy to see improvement.
不管如何，我期望这些主张对你有所协助。我会非常高兴看到情况改进。
4. i believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我信赖你会细心思考我的主张。不管你抉择做啥，祝你学习/作业好运。
5. i sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. if there is more i can do to help, please let me know.
我真挚的期望我的主张对你有一些协助。假定有更多我可以协助的，请告诉我。
【优良满分范文】
i’m li jin, a student at chenguang high school. as far as i am concerned, a lecture about western art will be given in the coming interchange activity in summer vacation. i’m writing to give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture.
as a music lover, i’m greatly fond of classic music, therefore i would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. in addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced.
i believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art. last but not least, i sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and hope you a wonderful trip to our school.
best wishes！
li jin
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